Hope you are doing well! Welcome to our third activity. Please, post your comments before April 29th, 2 p.m.!
1. Go to the web link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEukS2YN9B8 and watch the video (it was worked some classes ago).
- Introduction: it usually offers something that changes / affects / motivates the characters of the story to overcome a situation.
- Body: it usually reveals how the characters move toward overcoming the situation.
- Conclusion: it has to do with facing one difficult choice and decides one correct option while working out of the situation.
3. Write a paragraph for each one of the parts mentioned above, giving your own ideas to tell your version of the story. It must have 250 words at least.
4. Prepare an oral report about it to be presented in the tutorial sessions (from april 29th to may 2nd), you just will have 2 1/2 minutes and it is expected you to say 45 sentences at least.
- Simple sentence structures in the tenses you decide (The ones worked in last classes).
4. Language use / writing aspects:
- Simple sentence structures in the tenses you decide (The ones worked in last classes).
- Useful vocabulary you need to express your ideas.
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
ReplyDeleteDIANE AND HER PERFECT MAN
BY: ANA DEL PILAR SUAREZ
Once upon a time in some place in the United States, lived a girl named Diane. She was sixteen years old, but when she was five years old her father abandoned her. Since that time Diane needed a man with her. She studied in the new modern school. She didn’t share with girls and only stayed with boys. There she met a boy named Paul and, after a time, he became her boyfriend for four years later they planned to marry. They began to organize the wedding. Diane chose the wedding dress; the best flowers, the wedding church and she send the invitation card to all their family and friends. Paul escaped one month before the marriage because Diane was very jealous, impulsive, and possessive and sometimes she had strange behavior.
Diane did not want be alone nor lose her money. She decided to search for a man at all cost. She went up the stairs and arrived at second floor of a snack bar and she waited for some man. Suddenly, a man appeared. She dropped her shoe and the worried man went up the stairs. He thought that she was going to committed suicide and he stopped her. Diane thought that he loved her but he had wife and five children.
He ran to scape from her but she caught him. She cried and begged him. He married her. She paid him a lot of money and he accepted to marry. But, after the marriage the true man´s wife discovered them and he could not marry with Diane. She continued to search her perfect man on a bridge.
THE CRAZY WOMAN
ReplyDeleteWas one day very beautiful, in the New York City; Andrew gets up very happy because this day he had a sensation than something good will happened this day; he takes a shower, he dress up, and finally he said good bye to his wife. He starts to walk thinking than buy for his wife, because this day was them anniversary and he wants surprise her…
In this moment fell a shoe from the sky, he didn´t understand, but he looks up, and he sees a young woman than was about to commit suicide, he was a good man and decide help her, he ran up and he says her:” you are very beautiful and young maybe you are some problems, but all will be fine…” immediately she hug him and he invites her a coffee, but she confuses the things because she was very crazy and she thinks than she needs a man for be happy, Andrew try to explain than he was married but she didn’t understand and follow him, he ran for scape to her but she found again and he was tired of her, and shut her than he doesn’t want nothing with she and he go.( he learn a very important lesson don´t believe all you see…)
The crazy woman very angry decides come back to the begin for gets other stupid man than thinks than she goes commit suicide, and decides ‘help her’, and can find a boyfriend, but this probably don´t happen because she with her attitude only frighten the men and they scape to her.
The End? ....
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ReplyDeleteIntertextuality.
DeleteOnce upon a time in a big city, desperately Cinderella is searching a prince. She is too clever, that she wants to commit suicide herself. Now, she is on the highest building in the city, waiting that her prince comes to rescue her. Finally, in the distance, she looks a handsome gentleman, and she throws down a slipper.
The slipper beats the gentleman’s head, and he faints. Quickly, a young man comes here, he has a big belly, thin legs, and big eyes. When he looks up, he sees the woman, and he climbs the stairs jumping. At the half way, he feels tired, he looks green face. Fortunately, he gets to reach the top of the building.
When the young man and Cinderella look to each other, he says, “Here is your Romeo, my beautiful Juliet”.
Cinderella is at the edge of the cliff. The young man feels nauseous and, he brings up everything he has eaten on the Cinderella´s breast. She feels scared when she sees that on her breast, she falls down from the building on the gentleman, who dies because of the new blow. Cinderella survives, she only has a fracture in her right arm.
Next, the young man goes down the stairs. When Cinderella and the young man find again, he says, “Are you okay?” .She thinks that he is her true prince. The young man goes up to her, and she gives a kiss. Suddenly, the Cinderella´s belly begins to grow and her legs look thin now. Then, they take their hands, and they go to the forest, leaving the gentleman abandoned in the dark night.
In the forest, they swim into the lake. Here, their process of metamorphoses finishes, they have become in toads.
A STORY WITHOUT END: DAMN TOWNER
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time a city where lived an attractive man, he was handsome, kind and happy. One day he walked on the StreeT, when..suddenly a shoe falled in front of him, inmediately he thought “oh! My God rain of shoes”, so he look at the sky and saw to woman, who thought commit suicide, the woman was on the roof of a tower, but the man quickly rans towards to where the woman was, then when the man was with the woman, she decided not to commit suicide. The man invited to woman for have a breakfast, so they had a breakfast apparently normal.
In that moment the strange woman remembered her last boyfriend and confesed her love for him and she wanted to kiss him, but he was married, inmediately he said to himself “Oh! My God what was her intentions?” so he said her: good bye and he went to other place. The woman of uncommon beauty chased him, because she wanted a man, some man, she really needed one man. When she reached to man stopped him, but the responsable man said her " I was married, I loved my wife please left me in peace", the woman ignored him and she continued with her plane, so she continued chasing him, when the man thought that the woman left to chase, suddenly she appeared again and hit him, so the man said her "are you crazy?” I could not believe this thing and lifted the heavily. The woman cried, screamed and rans. But she thought " I could do this thing again ", so she returned to the roof of a tower, and waited to other man for she to left fall her shoe again.
This woman had mentals problems,she only wanted one husband, she had a lot of money, she was the owner of the tower and people around to the tower knew this situation and was very normal. Tells the story that women who lived here, were crazy and strange. For this reason was called DAMN TOWER...
The End.
Thank you all!
THE MANIAS THE A WOMAN
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, on England had a manifestation for the fashion, specially for the shoes. One day, sunny morning; a pretty, tall and elegant man Richard arrived an England, Richard was a tourist, who liked to travel an other places. He was walking and meeting the streets the England, however he was very thoughtful because he had finished his engagement with his girlfriend the last night; because he hadn’t to buy her some shoes, he thought and thought…how to fall in love her again? He said:
>¡I can give her roses! ----mmm, not she is allergic a roses” his mind answered.
>¡I can carry her songs! Nor, she likes the K-pop only.
>¡I can invite her to lunch! Not, she does diet. His mind answered again.
He was very thoughtful when a shoe fell dawn from sky, he got surprised and he said:”OHH MY GOD, SHOES FLYING “He looked up and saw a woman, who tried to suicide her, so; Richard ran and ran, climbed the stairs and he could to save her. He invited her to drink a coffee with cookies, when the Richard’s phone rang, it was his girlfriend, new he was happy .after he said her: “good bye, I nice to meet you” but she said him: “kiss me, kiss me, and please “she needed a boyfriend because she kissed a man never.
Finally Richard was worried, ran again, y said her: “you are a crazy woman “However this woman was girlfriend’s friend…
DEEP SEA
ReplyDeleteAbigail woke up that morning with the load off of her 40 years, with the first spots in her hands, some white hairs in her head and the empty place in the other side of the bed; she was a lonely secretary in an insignificant lawyer´s office and during fifteen years, she went to work quietly bearing her stupid boss every day. Abigail never traveled farther that the eight streets from her apartment to work, she neither eat unknown foods and she never had a story love.
Abigail in her bed thought in all those things that she never made and she concluded that in her 40´s she deserved someone of them, so she decided searched a story love for that special day, but Abigail was not a simple woman, she did not want a little romance, she wanted a real love and she decided that if she did not find her truthful love in the way from the apartment to the work, she would jump from the building.
The woman went out of the apartment and she started to walk, she felt excited and scared, Abigail was thinking about the possible man of her life; many men walked next to her but anyone of them saw to Abigail. In spite of the Abigail´s beautiful eyes and her elegant neck, during the way she did not get any glance, probably due to Abigail´s shyness.
Eight streets and Abigail did not find the love; she went up the buildings’ stairs slowly with the hope to find a man, even if he was ugly, who saved her. First, second, third, fourth floor... when she arrived to eighth floor, the last one, Abigail felt the wind in her face, it was cold and wet and the city was like a large sea where she could jump in its quite water. It was very deep, Abigail stretched her foot and her left shoe fell in the unfathomable sea of her lonely and in the end of the building she saw the love of her life, he was raising her shoe...
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ReplyDeleteHOW CAN YOU FEEL IN LOVE?
ReplyDeleteBY A CRAZY GIRL
This love story happened in the street in any place of the world and it started when Jack, a very young and handsome man was walking for the street after take his breakfast. He looked happy and relaxed; but suddenly a shoe fell down from sky. He looked up and saw a very beautiful woman who was in the top of the building, he could not believe it; a woman was trying to say with her attitude “look at me, I am feeling kind of down and I want to get suicide”. Jack ran up the stairs and helped woman to be quiet.
After, Jack invited woman to drink an herbal tea because she looked so nervous yet, and he discovered that girl’s name was Marian; she immediately felt in love but man was married and he only wanted to help her to be alive. Marian was crazy and she was feeling disappointed with Jack’s attitude; she ran behind he for a lot of blocks and man was disgust but Girl said him: “I truly love you; you are the most beautiful man I have ever seen!” Angrily Jack answered her “it does not matter to me! Please leave me alone, stop bothering to me! Go to another place and suit yourself!. When crazy girl listened to him, she started to cry because she could feel his indifference when he talked; but, to Marian it was not enough, she tried to talk with Jack, to hug him.
Man was losing it over here; he came back to the girl and took her for her arms and said her: Get lost!; she was feeling heartbroken and she came back to the building where this love story started; Marian went to the top for the stairs and ran until the roof, there she started her game again and threw a shoe to another poor man innocent man. The crazy girl of this story was desperate and she found a curious way to have a boyfriend quickly.
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ReplyDeleteTHE CITY OF THE LIT LIGHTS
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, there was a big city, it was called: “the city of the lit lights “, because all people lived full of terror for many things like: spiders, rats, dogs, and horror movies, amusement parks etc.; for this reason, they never put out the lights; darkness was terrible for each one. But also there, lived Liza, a beautiful woman who was very brave ; she loved to watch horror movies , and go to amusement parks and haunted houses, in addition she loved all kind of animals, because of she had not any friend in that place.
One day, Liza, bored for to be long time alone decided to go up a the construction most high of the city to pretend to be frighted, she wanted to find a brave man as friend, but no one wanted to help her. Then Liza, tired and sad, thought come back to home, but suddenly she saw from up, a nice man walking on Street, quickly she let to fall her shoe, and she closed her eyes, wishing that him, was a brave man. Then in a few seconds Liza listened a voice to say: “do not feel fear… I am here” so, Liza felt, for first time to be in love.
Then, she hugged him, but this man was trembling, after that, he invited her to drink coffee. Liza was happy, but the man wanted to run, then Liza saw so much fear in the man’s eyes, so she asked him: “why do you feel nervous?”, and the man said: “I do not know” so she asked again : “what do you like to do?”, and he answered : “I do not know, but I do not like to talk about me”, and asked to her: “ what do you like to do?, and Liza excited quickly answered: “ I love to watch horror movies, go to amusement parks, and love playing with all kind of animals like: spiders, rats, dogs… but right now, she said: " I like you!”.
As soon as the man listened this words, he wanted to leave to Liza, the man said things as: “Are you crazy? Let me alone.
L iza did not understand nothing, but finally she understood one thing very well, in the city the lit lights, people felt fear for many things but now, they felt fear for to be in love too.
At the end, Liza with her broken heart decided come back to the high construction, but in this time she wanted to take revenge for all women that wanted to be loved, but a bored and fearful man smote her heart.
The strangest story of love.
ReplyDeleteI know a women her name was Alison she was a beautiful, attractive and kind. I remember that she was thin and tall, her eyes were blue and she had black and short hair. She was ever funny and she liked and sign with our friends. When I know her she lived very good she had her parents and her siblings and apparently she was happy.
One day I saw, she was having a strange attitude because we were talking about our relationship and she was afraid because everyone had had a boyfriend or girlfriend but… she had never had a boyfriend in the school or in the university this was very strange for us. But I could ask her ¬–have had you a girlfriend? - This was normal for us but Alison said – No, I hadn’t -. I asked again –have you given a kiss? She said me I had never kissed someone. I thought unbelievable I have kissed very time and she is 32 years old and she hadn’t kissed anyone is terrible I said her. So she thought a strategy for give a first kiss and get boyfriend. She got up to a building and she threw one of her shoe so a boy found it .he saw upwards and he saw her there. They drank a coffee and they talked for few minutes, she tried to give a kiss but he stopped her and said that he had girlfriend. She begin shout and cry and the man was surprise he ran away and Alison followed him.
She did it again until one day Alison was tired so she thought “I threw the shoe for last time” she was very mad and only she thought in the first kiss I could see it many times. But one day straightly she threw the shoe and an ugly and disagree man found it and she without think it she got married with him and incredible they loved forever.
I could live this crazy story.
JUDE IN SEARCH OF LOVE
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, a beautiful young women, her name was Jude. She was twenty three years old. She was very sad, because her boyfriend left her. A morning she ascended to last step of a building, Jude wanted die. In these moments, a handsome young man, his name was Andrew, walked for the streets of the city, he saw fell front to him, immediately he saw toward above; there was Jude. Then, Andrew ran very fast, he ascend and he safe her. After, they fell and they entered a coffee shop. He invited her to drink a coffee, while she was peaceful. He said: my name is Andrew, please, tell me your name. she with her face sad, said: my name is Jude. Also, he said: you´re a beautiful and young women for die. Jude smiled and hugged him. After, when Andrew thought that she was more peaceful, he decided say: good bye. Andrew continued walking. More forward, Jude reach him, and again she hugged him. Then, Andrew was angry and said: you are crazy or that happens?. However, she tried to kiss him. Andrew was increasingly angry.
when he thought it had finally stopped teasing, she appeared at his side; so he said leave me alone, you are unbearable; now I understand why you wanted to die. then Jude was very sad, love again harmed. then she quickly ran to the building where he had started this crazy story. climbed the stairs and without thinking twice, picked up momentum, she was ready to end his life. but as it nears its end, she stopped, looked down, and saw a young handsome as much or more than the previous one was approaching; then she decided to throw his shoe and try your luck again. this would be the love of your life?
AN UNFORTUNATE GIRL
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, in a little town, lived a estrange and beautiful woman, she was so mysterious and enigmatic, her house was in a solitary place and her attitude was so sad, she was really a mystery, no one knew anything about her.
her story was so sad, her parents had died, in an horrible accident, their car fall in a river, and mysteriously her bodies never appeared, after the accident, she change, her name was Isobel, she was so beautiful, her eyes was blue, her skin was perfect and her smile was wonder, but when she was alone, this smile disappeared.
After the accident, she went with her grandparents, but they were so wicked, and every day was a torture and she decided to escape.
Her next home was with her uncle, he was a good person, but her wife was a horrible woman, she hated Isobel, was so odious and rude, Isobel was so sad in that house, she felt so lonely, and decided went with her cousin, but his house was so little for two people.
Finally, she decided went to other place, a different and better place, she traveled to Port Angeles, a little and beautiful town, she bought a pretty house and began again.
Every day she walked in the town, but she was not happy, and one day in a moment of sadness she decided to commit suicide, run to the top floor in a build and, when she was ready to jump, a kind man appeared, he was lovely, spoke to her and said very nice things, when the wonder man went to his house, Isobel thought that she really needed a boyfriend, and pretend a suicide was an excellent way to obtain it.
A crazy obsession
ReplyDeleteEverything begins on a warm September where a couple who love each other decide to take different paths because the girl became obsessed and she was about to kill to her couple because of a misunderstanding , the main characters of this story are Michael and Celena .
4 months after it happened comes a new person to Michael’s heart and he begins to love her , but Celena has not yet been able to maintain a stable relationship, all men bored of her attitude because she every day spies to Michael , it was a desperate obsession.
8 months after she follows him, she decides to trap a little changing their physical appearance and was either a Wednesday when Michael went out to meet with his friends, Celena saw him and came forward , climbing to the top of a building trying to commit suicide , when Michael crosses , she gently dropped his left shoe.
Michael thinks: Oh god does what it does not rain but now rain is what shoes? And raises his eyes and sees a young girl and as the runner runs desperately to rescue. Arrives exhausted and says : Wait, do not. The girl turns and Michael is surprised to see her and he invites her to take a coffee to talk , he tells all about his new love, but she does not accept, Celena thinks that he still loves her and she tries to kiss him. Michael leaves her because of boring attitude but Celena decides to chase , they meet again and she pushes him throwing grotesque words, but Michael is patient and does not answer her, but she goes on and on insulting him until he takes hard neck and says: Celena no more , I'm bored with you , I should go up to help , you are definitely crazy.
These words do to feel bad to Celena and she runs into the building to kill himself but he thought , “If I drop my shoe again suddenly get someone who wants to help and maybe fall in love with me”, after she sees a guy walking and says: “ah, here you are!, take your shoe and here I hope!
Thank you for reading!
JUAN CARLOS FUENTES
ReplyDeleteLOVE AT FIRST SIGHT...
In a noisy and big city lived a weird girl called maggie she always was a problem in the school because she did not understand how the classmates acts but she knew a little boy who showed her the world in other way, his name was pete and they were friends, but he didn´t know that she was in love for him. it was one of the causes of her madness, because pete never was notice that and he never was in love of her.
Many years later she was completely mad and she didn't find sens to her life, so she decided to put finish to all her problems and went to an old building and in the last floor she was decided to do one streategie that if it worked she didn´t jump. a shoe fell down and one guy noticed that and looked up and saw the woman there and went upstairs and save her life. that guy was pete, her school friend and she said to him that she alwayas was in love of him, but he didn`t matter that and he left her and went to his home. she fell again in depression.
Finally she decided that her life had no sense and went back to the building and this time decided to jump down but destiny had something preparedfor her. One guy that was passing by saw maggie and went to her and was love at first sight.
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ReplyDeleteTerrible disappointed
DeleteThere was once a desperate woman to find her true love. Her name was Amy, she wanted to feel loved and she would do anything to get love. One day she was walking down the street, she stepped on a banana and she fell to the floor. A handsome man helped her; she saw his eyes and immediately she fell in love, but the handsome would not correspond to that love.
The handsome man was gone, but Amy could not stop thinking him and she decided to follow him. The man was in the park, Amy came also to the park and she gave flowers to him, but he didn’t accept it and he went. Then, the man was in the shopping center and Amy was there, she gift him chocolates but he didn’t accept them. Amy bought a big teddy bear and gave it to him where the handsome man worked, but he was angry and pushed her out to the street. Amy didn’t know that more things do, and she decided to make a big poster, it said "You are my true love" and put in front of the handsome man's house. She was anxious and expected that he get out the house, and the man came out, but with his partner, another handsome man.
Amy was disappointed and sad, she returned at home, she was crying and she was very angry, but she didn't saw that there was another banana on the floor and fell again and again helped her to stand up but this time the eyes were a beautiful woman.
The end.
This is a crazy story about a crazy girl that thinks or wants to find her love of her life; well she is crazy because that one way to find is trying to suicide or jump of a very tall edifice. And she meets paco, oh!! Poor paco! He doesn’t know that is with her is like a hell, and what a mess!
ReplyDeleteThis story beginning when a guy is walk for anywhere, so he is very handsome and attractive guy and is a little serious but it doesn’t matter, well here enter to story the crazy girl and i’ll call them paco and lola. Ok. lola decides to throw a shoe, cross her fingers that a guy find her shoe, and “talk of the devil” one guy find her shoe and , it’s very dirty but it’s not important, well he looks up and sees a girl, normal, she looks like normal girl, but he hasn’t got a clue that she is cu-cu well crazy. Paco decides to save her life, they enter to a coffee to drink some beers and count their story life, the story of lola is sad because everybody deserted her pass some time, and paco feels bad, she finds in he a good guy and tries to kiss him, but paco is married with a beautiful girl, paco leave the coffee and lola dicides to pursue him she looks like a sociopath girl or a psychopath girl, she is very rare, well pass some minutes he can get rid of she.
To sum up he arrives his home and she does the same again, at the next they he pass his hangover and believes that the crazy girl was a horrible nightmare, and she……. Well!!!! She doesn’t matter.
liliana cifuentes
DeleteTHAT'S LIFE.
ReplyDeleteJay Park; Jay Park was a slovenly boy. He didin't use to be a fashion boy; he woke up late since he had a half-time job, but that day... That day he wanted to do something different. He was tired because of the monotony so, he decided to go for a walk. He was thinking to do something more when, suddenly, a shoe fell down from a high building and hit his head. He turned his eyes up and he could see a woman. He though that maybe she was joking but, unfortunately, he achieved to see her eyes. She seemed sad.
—Perhaps I must go upstairs and take a look.— He said to himself.
Jay went there. That girl was on the edge. He was afraid because of her. Maybe she wanted to suicide. He didn’t know what to do. He walked through her while that girl was thinking about a boy she loved. Jay, carefully, took her hand and pulled her to his chest. She felt that warm which that strange person emanated. She felt as if she were flying across the heaven; suddenly, her thoughts turned in a different way. She didn’t want to know anything about that man who didn’t love her.
—Are you OK? —Asked Jay.
—Oh, yes. Thank you. — She replied. Finally, she could see Jay’s eyes.
—What did you want to do? — Another question slipped from Jay’s lips.
—I… I just wanted to watch the landscape. — She smiled to him.
—Really? But you’re too crazy to be on the edge just to watch the landscape. — He said in a funny way.
The girl smiled one more time. They decided to go down stairs and speak a little bit.
—Would you like a coffee? — Asked Jay.
—Yes, of course. — Said the girl.
They went to a coffee shop. The environment was pretty good and that girl didn’t want to stop to see Jay’s eyes. She had fallen in love with him. It was strange because he appeared like a ghost and, obviously, it couldn’t happen.
They spoke long time.
—Do you have girlfriend? — Asked her.
—No, I don’t. — Answered Jay.
—Would you be my boyfriend? — Another question was said by her.
—What are you asking me? No, you’re crazy. I don’t even know what your name is. — Said Jay very surprised.
—Well, my name is Hyun Ah. Now, could we be couple? —
—Of course no. — Jay stood up from the chair.
—Give me a kiss. I love you. — She approached near him. Too near from his lips.
—Oh. No, no, no. Stop here. — He got a little bit angry. After that, he left the place.
Hyun Ah stood there a few minutes, then, she went behind him. She was crazy because of love; Jay was the perfect man for her and she didn’t want him to go on.
—What is happening here? He can’t leave me. He has to be by my side. What should I do? — She thought.
Suddenly, she started to run towards Jay. She was angry because every man she loved, run. She pushed him madly.
—What do you want from me? — Asked Jay.
—I really love you. — She replied.
—It can’t be possible. GO AWAY! — He shouted.
Hyun Ah was very sad because her plan with her shoe didn’t work. She had a big psychological problem: His mother was kicked by her father when she was child so, for that reason, most of the time she wanted a man who could be soft with her. She thought that, perhaps if she was able to throw a shoe from the top of a building, the boy who could pick up it, would be his lover forever. But she wasn’t right. She was going to be alone until she died.
I really like your work, it is very interesting because you included in the story, things of your personal life. You have a great imagination. The composition, the punctuation is different, is well done. Congratulations on your work.
DeleteThis story begins with a girl called carla, she was white, green eyes, black hair and she was eighteen years old, she lived with her family, father, mother and three brothers she was the only girl in the family and they lived in a city casadlled San Diego.
ReplyDeleteOne day very cold and it was rine Carla and her mother traveled to another city her mother was drived and she was very angry because Carla didnt eat anything, after that other lost the car control and crash with a tree.
Carla's mother died and all the family accuse to Carla of her mother's death, she was so sad and anguish and she decided scape of her home, she was lost some days in the City and she decided suicide her self; she went to a edifice and went up to the last floor, when she arrived, she cast a shoe to the precipice and fall down in the graund, a man called tom saw this and run in her help.
When he saw Carla he fall in love of she and Carla didnt jump Tom help Carla and they went to Tom's home and Carla stayed there for some days.
After that Carla and Tom falls in love and they decide married, and about the Carla's family she never knew nothing.
Tom and Carla were a beautiful couple and they were so happy but three years then Tom traveled to Japan but desafortunatly he died because of a air accident.
Carla couldnt beliebe and she covert in crazy because she loved Tom with all her forces.
Since this day she returns to the same edifice where some day she cast a shoe to the precipice and wait for a some man that arrive to help her then she fall in love of they, but all men doesnt like her, then she remember Tom and returns await for a day he will help her another time.
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ReplyDeleteThe perfect man doesn't exist.
ReplyDeleteShe is a beautiful girl with fair skin and light eyes blue eyes her name is Cristine . She was very happy because he was going to marry with the love of his life . The day that would have taken place the marriage, the man decides to confess to his girlfriend that he is gay and having a relationship with a man two years ago, before that he met her.
Cristine decided that would not give any importance to this fact and would to forget .But a few days later could not stand . He had not eaten in days . Days without bathing . And she doesn't came out to parties with her friends .
Cristine decided to end his own life. This day she ran to the top floor of the building where she lived , when she was there , a million thoughts cross for her head. She didn't understand why all her relationships have gone wrong, with the boy in her school, the college , the milkman , the baker , the lawyer , the engineer and others. She discovered that the perfect man doesn't exist and as there was a man who could make happy to her, it was best to end his life , preferring to die rather than be poor. She also thought about being a lesbian , but remembered that she had already tried that and it had not worked.
Suddenly, when she was ready to make reality a decision , she threw a shoe. There was a man was on the road which realized what she wanted to do , so he took the shoe and thought " this girl shouldn't have been bathed in days must be a woman who lives in the street," he ran to the last floor and tried to stop her, she saw that he wanted to help and thought he was a man of a lot of money and could pay all the things around the house , so she grabbed the man's hand and went with him.
he invited her to have coffee, she thought in gratitude could kiss him , but he told her he was already married , she burst into tears again and thought his luck was too bad .
She didn't give up and kept looking for the man who had invited him coffee, but he showed such contempt for her and she understood that he was not for her .
Cristine discovered that this was a good strategy to attract men , so she made a promise, she pledges that do this for some days while found a man "From now on I will use this estrategy for to find a man to pay my bills and buy me clothes."
People says they even looks a beautiful young woman that stands on the top floor of a building and throw shoes every week. Everyone is happy in his own way
WAITING SOME UNEXPECTED
ReplyDeleteThat morning Charlie woke up very late, it was a cloudy day, but he got up whit a big smile, he thought that something wonderful would happen this morning, something that he has been waiting for 10 years since his wife died.
In the other place f this city, Susan who is 30 years old, she has been looking for the perfect man to found the perfect love, but instead she meet sadness and pain although this morning felt a crazy impulse, she dressed her white shoes, her shoes of good luck. Then she left her house and looked for a building, there she went upstairs and she look the horizon and she throw her shoe, waiting that the perfect man arrive at her rescue.
Suddenly a handsome man appear, he was Charlie, he was looking for a coffee when a shoe fell down from the sky… he look up and saw a woman, quickly he went upstairs for help her. Susan thinks that maybe he can be the perfect man. They embraced and Susan saw him, she saw his beautiful eyes, his hands, and she felt happy.
Later they were drinking a coffee suddenly Susan want a kiss, but Charlie don´t want it because in this moment he knew that nothing wonderful would happen between them. Charlie decides leave the café and continue look for her destination but Susan didn’t want be alone, she think that Charlie would her perfect man for this reason she chase him, she felt disappointed when Charlie rejected her.
She had been looking for the perfect man when Charlie left her.
Other crazy girl. . .
ReplyDeleteThat story begins when a day a crazy girl her name is jane wants to find the love of her life but i say that she is crazy cause an unexpect trick to fall in love; one day she is trying to suicide jumping from a high building. And she meets andrew walking with out troubles.
This story began when a guy is hanging out, but suddenly a handsone man appear,his name was andrew,he was finding a place where take a meal when a shoe fell down from the sky,he looked up and could see taht it was a young and preety girl(but a little crazy. . .he don´t know it yet),he ran upstairs wanting to help her and she tought this is the perfect man,i need him,i´ll get married,but she didn´t know that he has a beatiful wife so andrew invite her to drink a cup of coffe,in this moment he began to tell her about his family,his wife and his son but jane was crazy and she was disappointed with his comments and she tought -that isn´t my problem,don´t you understand me?,i need you,you´re the perfect man to me and she decided to kiss him but he didn´t like so andrew leave the place because he is very dissapointed but she ran behind him for many streets saying that he is the love of her life.andrew didn´t return so she decide to continue with your crazy game waiting for an other innocent man he so she was in a bad mood and she came back to the building where this crazy love story started; jane went to the top for the stairs and ran to the flat roof, there she continues with her game again and threw the other shoe to another innocent man. The crazy girl of this story was deseperate and she wanted to find the love of her life quickly,but she finally was playing a game with out good results.
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Camile, She was very beautiful, but she was a kind of "emptyhead". She had a boyfriend, Richard, he was a handsome guy, but she always looked for girl just for sex. He has cheated her several times but she always forgived him, because she was really in love and she doesn't have any other family or person, But, finally after three years of this process, Camile broke up with him! However, she was very sad and she wanted to killherself, so she went to a building's roof to jump.
ReplyDeleteWhen Camile reached the edge of the roof, she felted scared and she started to think about it, but an the same time Coby, a guy that was walking down street saw her in the roof, and he decided to go upstairs to catch her, he makes it and persuade her to not jump. They went together to a pub and they started drinking scotch and beer, after a long time, they got seriously drunk and they decided to go walking to the city's outsides. Once they were there Camile felted attracted for Coby beacuse he has been very gentle and polite with her and he looked like Richard, therefore she tried to kiss him, but he refuses because he was married. Camile got mad and push him down a cliff...
Being chased for the police, alone, depressed and regreted. She decided to go to the building's roof once again, she was standing on the edge, whe she saw Richard just below her with two girls flirting and kissing ich other. She got crazy and jumped over him killing with his own body to that menage a trois and herself in the process! That the end of the story fellas! :D
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ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time a girl named Caroline, she was tall and thin and she had short and black hair. She lived with her mother and three sisters. When she was thirteen years old, a neighbor tried to rape her, but that day her mother came home early and did not allow it. Her neighbor remained in jail for many years. After that, Caroline swore revenge on all men as a consequence of what had happened.
When she was nineteen years old, she was on the building’s roof when suddenly she thought about suicide because her life had no meaning. Then, one of her shoes fell on the street and a very handsome man saw her and ran to prevent she committed suicide. They went to drink coffee and he fell in love with her. Days after, she left him and repeated the story with many men. She thought if they fell in love and then she left them, she could fulfill the promise that one day she did.
Then, she did the same with five men. One day a very handsome young saw the shoe fall but he did not ran to help her, he just kept walking. When Caroline saw this, chased him and asked why he had not helped, he replied that suicide was a personal decision and he would not interfere with that. She started to fall in love with him and she followed him every day to his job.
They started to go out and Caroline fell in love with him and forgot the promise that one day she did when she was a child. When the young saw that Caroline was in love, he cited in an old building’s roof and while she arrived at the building, he jumped from the fifth floor.
She ran to help him but he was dead; at that time, she found in his jacket pocket a letter that said:
"I am the man’s son who remains in jail; now you will suffer the guilt of my death"
The end!
By: Tania Alejandra Nieto Espinosa
hi everibody!
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In the city of new york Katy lives , she is the daughter of divorced parents and she works as a wedding planner , in a few days she is going to be 30 and is the only of her friends who is not married and has not children, she is very worried that none of his relationships worked, she is a very controlling and dominant woman and therefore none of his relationships have lasted long . She is very worried about his singleness for this reason, she decided to find man of her life anyway.
One day she wakes up with the crazy idea to pretend a suicide, the plan is to climb to the roof of her favorite coffee shop , she will expect a handsome man walks in front of the cafe and when this happens, she threw a shoe from high when man walks , look up and go to rescue her. She began her plan , climbed onto the roof and saw a very nice blond man crossed in front of the cafe, the man up his eyes and saw that the shoe belonged to a woman who wanted to jumped, man climbed the stairs quickly to prevent her to " commit suicide " ; he tries to reassure her.
Katy is very happy because she thinks that her plan worked ; the man invited her to take a coffee and talk to her for a short while , then he decided to leave, she did not want him to stay away from her, so she decided to follow him and insist that she is the love of his life , the man is terrified and confused, he thinks that Katy is crazy , he try to explain her that he is a married man and did not want to have a relationship, but she continued to insist and many streets chasing him , he tried to stop her, but she insisted , the man lost his temper and angrily threw it against a fence , Katy looked at him surprised and very angry ran to the cafeteria , there goes upstairs to the roof and decides to start the plan again , is determined to find her true love .
the end
by. Paola Nuñez
Diego Camargo Riaño
ReplyDeleteRachel's life.
Rachel was married with Sheldon, they were a lovely couple, they started dating when they were just a kids from school, but Rachel tired of his life began to cheating on him, she become in a nymphomaniac, and she turn in a slut, tired of that Sheldon let to Rachel. She started dating with lot of men and she had sex with they at the first time that she knows the guys, but one day she discovered that she wasn't a happy person.
All started when Charlie was walking on the sidewalk, (he was so happy, because her wife rose was pregnant, he was so in love of her, they were just married), he went to the pub of the neighborhood to celebrate the news of her wife, but when Charlie was walking, a shoe hits his head, when he saw up Rachel was in the roof of the building, he ran upstairs, and he took her from the arm.
They started talking, and they went to a coffee shop, she was so confused because she didn’t understand why he help her, she got the wrong idea, and she thought that he was in love of her, but he only was a good citizen, so she tried to kiss him, and he talk to her that he was married, and they out of the store, so he left her and he went to pub and he drank a lot of beer with his best friend jerry, when he return to his house he didn’t talk anything to her wife about Rachel, because rose always was so jealous and he was afraid that rose didn’t understand the Rachel’s problem, well a few days passed and Rachel started to follow him, but he didn’t know that, when Rachels knew the Charlie’s daily activities, she turned in the greatest stalker ever, and she started to call to her house, send underwear to his job, leave him notes in windshield of the car etc.
When she was back in her house at nights, she turned again in the dark Rachel(the bitch Rachel) and all ways after eats she went to a bar, and she fucked with any one of the bar, but she always thoughts in Charlie.
When Rachel was following in her diary harassment she saw that Charlie was going to the pub, and she think “that’s my opportunity” she went in at the pub called “coffee black gold” she used a wig and she started talking with the bar tender, finally when Charlie was drunk she talked to him, and she put scopolamine in his beer, and she drove him to her house, but she couldn’t rise him from the back seat, she was so far with the dose, so she took him to the hospital, and in E.R he died of a overdose.
So the crazy lady lost “her love’s life” but she knew how to know new people and don’t kill them in the attempt.
TRAPING A LOVE
ReplyDeleteThis story began, when the family Robertson was planning a trip to meet to Hawai, they had been saving money for this travel. Finally, the day arrived. when they went to the hotel in their car, other crashed with they. In this accident died the Mr. Robertson and their two children. and the Mrs. Robertson survived. Now three years later, she cann't forget the day that their family died.
in this years, she didn't go out of her house, suddenly, she decided to go to walk. while she walked and walked, looked toward the sky but moreover she could see a terrance and she wanted upload to the terrance. she ran to the stairs and being in this place, she approched to the edge and she looked toward below. She couldn't believe the distance. A minutes later, a men was passing for the pavement. suddenly, she launched one of her shoes without think two times. this man thought that this women wanted die and he ran where she was. Minutes later, they come down and they spoken in a cafe. she saw he like her husband. when he decided to go, she began to persue and persecute him... she didn't leave him. when he didn't stand for more time, he stopped and said so many things to her. She didn't walking back of he.
she backed to the terrance and when she looked that a boy came, she did the same that she had done with the previous man, but for this boy wasn't important it and he followed walking. the woman saw that the boy done and was a moment so strong to she that finally she jumped.
By: Erika Morales
HE JUST WANTED A "THANKS"
ReplyDeleteIt was a normal day for Tim until he was walking on the street, but then a shoe fell in front of him; it was weird- he thought.
Then he looked up and saw a girl, Tim ran so fast to save her; slowly he start to walk to hold her, saying to her - Hey! Don’t do this please, take mi hand!
Maria didn’t know what to do with her life, she needed someone who cares about her; her parents had left her when she was a child and she lived with her grandmother all this time. So tired of everything, she decided to made a crazy plan for get someone… so she stand up at the corner of a building and she left her shoe fall to the ground when a good looking boy passed.
Then, Tim show up to save her, afterwards he take her to a café, suddenly Maria wanted a kiss and a hug from Tim, she took his hands and looked him so in love, but Tim was confused, he only wanted to save her and that was it! So he said her - I don't want anything with you! And he started to run.
Maria followed him; she wanted to be with him; she felt that if someone saved her could fell in love of her when he looked her eyes, but it wasn’t like that.
Tim felt stalked and weird, he just thought- this girl is so crazy! Why I had to cross with her! Why? - And he ran faster.
Afterwards, Maria found him and she said to him:
- Why are you running?
- I don’t want anything from you! Don’t you get it?- Said Tim
- You are an asshole!
- Just leave and move on with your life- Said Tim
Maria hit him and started to run, she started to think about what she had to do? Her craziness up, she went upstairs from the same building and she waited for someone else who could fall in love of her.
Tim didn’t want to know about that crazy girl who followed him just for save her, he just wanted a – Thanks for help me! That was it!